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Great review, KudzaiK. Thank you.
About the criticism, my answer is that the contest had a suggested number of words, and I tried to adjust the story to that. With more words I would have fleshed everything out a bit more, but hey... It's short and swe... sour, it's short and sour. Hahahahhahahhahahhaha!
Cheers!
😂 ok gotcha and that makes a ton of sense. You really did good developing the story and while you left us hanging maybe this opens up a slot for a sequel 😁
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Let's fucking go!
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