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200 sats \ 3 replies \ @KudzaiK 31 Aug \ on: [FM] "2223" (A “The Citadel” story by Eduardo Próspero) BooksAndArticles
Tragic ending though which is a bit of a cliffhanger but at the same time the entire story does get you thinking of after hyperbitcoinization then what?! Interesting though the storyline could have used a bit more of emotive characters but I like it. Good job 👏🏻
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0 sats \ 2 replies \ @eduardopro OP 1 Sep
Great review, KudzaiK. Thank you.
About the criticism, my answer is that the contest had a suggested number of words, and I tried to adjust the story to that. With more words I would have fleshed everything out a bit more, but hey... It's short and swe... sour, it's short and sour. Hahahahhahahhahahhaha!
Cheers!
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0 sats \ 1 reply \ @KudzaiK 1 Sep
😂 ok gotcha and that makes a ton of sense. You really did good developing the story and while you left us hanging maybe this opens up a slot for a sequel 😁
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0 sats \ 0 replies \ @eduardopro OP 2 Sep
Let's fucking go!
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