this pitch is great for LPs, similar discourse could work to engage with more territory funders. Not ideal to onboard the next wave of new stackers.

The tagline should be attractive for the target audience. It could be tricky because every territory operate differently. I found "En-lightning people with value" is a common ground that apply to all territories. Audience does not need to know abut bitcoin, just need to be willing to learn about a new platform.

Another one I read around that could work really well is "fixing communities with economics". A copywriter could help find better wording