I do like this version better! I like the shorter motto: ***The junction between beauty and functionality*** I don't know that it benefits too much from a closing "*to bloom and shape our reality*.  The redundancy is interesting, I hadn't caught it before but you have a great point about the unnecessary repetition.

Appreciate the feedback. I want to have SN logo there... do you reckon simply making the text sizes smaller and create more void empty space between Satoshi faces could help your eyes find a reading direction? 

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Rethinking the motto as: **_The junction between beauty and functionality_**

and closing with: _... to bloom and shape our reality._

Noticing some territory name redundancy... not sure why it needs to be repeated 3 times

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deSign_r

the start here link is nice! Makes me feel like I should just dive in.

Maybe consider a tiny bit less text on the banner/hero image. My eyes aren't sure where to go on it.

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saloon

the start here link is nice! Makes me feel like I should just dive in. 

Maybe consider a tiny bit less text on the banner/hero image. My eyes aren't sure where to go on it.