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I am going by the assumption that you are a clothes store since there are references to craft in the text and needles in one of the pictures.
I would like to view this in two perspectives. One from a design perspective and the other from a user perspective. And in the end also provide suggestions.
Design:
Image 1: Strengths : The outlined circle in the first image can be interpreted as a sewing box.
Weakness : The instrument in the center does not resemble a needle. The thread in the supposed needle is not in the right place.
Image 2: Strengths
Clear imagery of a needle. And good placement in the center to highlight it. Proper placement of thread in the needle Minimalistic mountain imagery.
User perspective :
The mountains in both pictures gives me a feeling of scaling something and toughness. Needle makes me think of clothes.
Suggestions :
I think it would be super clear if you made a overcoat/suit/shirt dressing up the mountains and using the needle as a tie. Attached image reference
Awesome input! I'm going to be making outdoor / military accessories and pouches for backpacks, vests and the likes, and maybe later backpacks as well.
I like your take very well, but it doesn't yet picture what I'm actually going to be making..
You'd opt for the 2nd as well, hm?
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Thank you for the response. Yes, I definitely prefer the second one. Perhaps one thing that the second one can pick from the first one is the clear circular outline.
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