Alright, just touched up the outline for my short story.

Its looking a lot better, and i'll probably have the whole thing finished by the end of the year.

I have 12 chapters planned out separated into 4 sections.

Right now the title is "The Cannibal Bus" Its aspiring to be something like The Wizard of Oz meets Anthem.

I'll probably have a super rough draft ready in November, I'd pay you sats for a lookover and solid critique.