Show don't explain use to tremendous effect for the mysterious compound. And the faux window realization is well executed. I willingly plunged into the mass suicide and felt exhilarated and silly as you pulled me back out.
I wonder if unexplained details could be also be employed for the narrator's inner monologue? The language here is like a psychologist describing a child at play. But I want to read a child describing the psychologist.
Nice work. I wonder what's in storage?
very happy to know something of how it comes across to you, I will think on it. Yes, what is in storage...? hmmm
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