Hello again, want to say that it gives me much satisfaction to have anything I write being read by people, so thanks stackers. I love it here. Last week I shared an older poem that I feel less connection to now, and I would have thought that would be the case for much of my older work. Yet this one I present today is different.
The young person that wrote these words was struggling to make sense of life. In the background of a few years, I think the truth of this poem has been working over me very slowly. I was projecting my life forward, to where I am now, and hoping I wouldn't stop taking signs from the colors of the evening. I was hoping I wouldn't stop being a poet, at that time feeling the pressure of career path like a death. And it's different now, but I haven't stopped. I want to tell you what peace comes from knowing yourself, even your past and future fragments, and correctly lining them up. To expect nothing from your future self, but trace out the lines you imagine growing into, then see your shape fill in those lines...it is powerful.
This poem is also cute because it's the future I imagined sharing with my partner. And in this I was also accurate.
"A hero with zero accomplishments," yep that's me. Thanks for reading!
60 sats \ 2 replies \ @ek 31 May
What I like the most about your writing is that it's very relatable. You're pretty good at teleporting someone into the moments and emotions you share.
Additionally, getting to know you a little irl gives your writing even more depth to me now (I read your poems in your voice now). I also feel honored that I can say I have talked to @plebpoet in person, haha
You mentioned that you feel less connected to your older poem but I think another way to see it is that whatever someone reads from you, it makes them feel more connected to you, even if it's from your past self
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thanks! I appreciate your thoughts. It is a pleasure now to call you a friend, and not just a nym
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When I said hello and you dropped your laptop, I thought that this could have happened to me just as well and thus we’re going to be friends haha
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Nice poem!!
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You have already accomplished writing a poem. Congratulation!
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30 sats \ 0 replies \ @zx 31 May
Not too shabby. I can't write poems for toffee. Eloquent is your finger, to the keyboard you bash. What sources, or sauces, inspired the garnish to the lexical dish? o' pleb! ;oO ))
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Thank you for sharing your poetry friend, being a poet is trying to show your world to the world.
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We have a poet. One of these days I'm going to compete with you ;)
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Very nice.
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Thanks for sharing this -- both the poem itself and your reaction to it now.
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