you're fine for a more intermediate or advanced beginner. They already know the why, so my point is invalid there. 

When I say clear and concise I mean for a wider audience. Adding a couple of why statements earlier on opens up the content to some who will stop at paragraph one or two. 

Hope you found the discussion helpful. 

Starters, although I'm trying to portray a pretty complete and thorough picture from the get-go, which might make it more suitable for the already more advanced (knowledgeable) starter.

Fabs

The answer to why is who. Who is your audience? 

All writers disagree with editors. All writers need editors. 

TNStacker

bitcoin_beginners

Work-in-progress of my guide on financial sovereignty with Bitcoin.

Hm. I'll put some further thought towards the structuring, but honestly? 

If a few minutes is already too long to get from the *detailed* "what" to the *detailed* "why", then it might not be the guide for you.

I'm not saying you're wrong, I simply don't see a way of improving the above as of now, and I kinda fail to see the bigger "*why*".