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It needs a chorus:
I got dem coinkite Blues,
From my head right to my shoes.
I got dem coinkite Blues,
From my head right to my shoes
She even got my seeds
And you wonder why I got the blues?
Not gunna lie... It is straight rubbish off a dodgy throat (cos Ive had the man flu) recorded on mobile sat in my car 🤣🤣 but I got something... What I can't work out is how to upload an audio file...sooo I'll try and work that out and get back to you with the file.
Ok... So oddly enough I've been able to hear this (or at least, hear something) in my head.
Just for fun I might add a really simple blues line to this and see how it sounds. Could be a giggle. But I'm by no means a good guitarist.
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Havn't picked one up in several years but playing a simple blues riff wouldn't be too difficult. At least one really really simple one to just give the lyrics so kinda base to be expanded on.
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I'd actually be better with the gravelly voice than I would with the guitar.
I'm a much better vocalist than guitarist 😂
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I doubt I'll be able to get to it til weekend or maybe mid next week. Maybe. But just reading the lyrics I managed to find a tune I could fit to it. Might need to manipulate some of the lyrics.
Like in the lyrics rhyming seed with blues feels off to me, but I thought of.
She even got my seeds,
Now she's run out, with my keys.
Which I know is kinda saying the same thing... But it was only a tiny substitution.
There's a little word skipping when trying to hit the beat in my head, couldn't decide between "yelled out last call" and yelled : "last call"