360 sats \ 3 replies \ @cryotosensei 21 Jan \ parent \ on: Stacker Saloon
Parched spirits struggle
Just-opened pub waves its hands
Tired smiles ensue
https://m.stacker.news/13190
Awesome and such a beautiful haiku.
(Is the last line a 5 syllable? - apologies if it is as my English isn’t great)
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How would you read the last line? I read it as 5 syllables:
tir-ed smiles en-sue
I think an interesting thing about writing haikus is that I discover not everyone pronounces words the same way I do. And it’s humbling haha
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You are an educator so I very much stand in your shadow.
I read it as;
‘tired smiles en-sue’
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