44 sats \ 1 reply \ @Bitman 11 Sep 2023 \ on: Chapter 1: The Beginning of Adventure bitcoin
It is a translation from the original Spanish version (link below), so please let us know if you find any error or if you have any suggestion on how we could improve it.
Keep your eye on the pronouns: unless it's on purpose, you refer to Aria both as 'she' and 'he' in chapter 1.
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0 sats \ 0 replies \ @VEINTIUNO OP 7 Sep
Thanks for your feedback! I'll keep it in mind when rewriting it
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