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Shoving this in ~econ because... I dunno, everything is econ, I'm Undisc's bitch, and this is all one hell of an expected-value calculation anyway — a 0.1%(?) chance at a cool, important, high-paying gig, for a future I just _hope, pray, and want_ to be real.


So, there's this amazing resource out there, called "Our World in Data" (if you've never been... wth are you doing with your life?). They distribute and show absolutely every imaginable data on e.g., global health, there is. They're certainly infused by very woke-y, establishment-y and environmentalist-y crap, but at heart they're a serious data visualization and presentation outlet — dedicated to truth, nuance, and going where the evidence shows you, not pushing ideological nonsense (cough, New York Times; cough-cough Science)

#1471740...

I've never been any good at writing these pompous, not-very-flattering, lying-adjacent letters about how amazing you are and what you, yes you, can do for whatever organization you're keen to work with.

I don't recall having ever landed a job or gig because of them either, so who knows if they even matter.I don't recall having ever landed a job or gig because of them either, so who knows if they even matter.

Alas, a perfect learning-in-the-open opportunity and living by the stacker-muse's ethos: ask for help, see if others know how to write/can help you improve.

Schtackers, let me know what you think and how I can best improve it. Lord knows I rip into yous on here whenever I see some crap, so please tell me off when I'm batshit crazy.


I asked a couple of AIs to improve it, too, but my god did they...
- a) dumbified it down and profesh-polished the shit out of it
- b) made it sound so unbelievably AI that I couldn't stomach it.

(hence why I've kept some personal, unprofesh anecdotes in there... best way to signal non-AI that I can think of.)


I am applying for the writer position at Our World in Data. My work sits at the intersection of data, economics, and public communication: explaining complex global trends to broad audiences in ways that are both analytically rigorous and engaging.
My public writing focuses on long-run economic development, technological change, energy systems, and human progress — topics that closely align with OWID’s coverage. In articles for popular and educational outlets such as HumanProgress.org and The Daily Economy, I interpret empirical datasets and academic research to help general readers understand complicated and nuanced trends. For instance, I have examined how innovations like tractors or AI diffuse unevenly across societies, how much posturing on inequality is unfounded, how many environmentalist claims around deforestation and natural disasters are misleading; how the price system governs, mediates, and regulates resource use. Like the "someone is wrong on the internet" meme, I'm often drawn to challenging prevailing narratives by grounding arguments in evidence. Much of that work revolves around economics-related topics, the sentiment overlap with OWID is clear; the ethos of progress and the commitment to truth — warts and all — is undeniable... Honest storytelling, acknowledging problems while grounding optimism in evidence.

Probably should take that out, I dunno. Was fun.

For years, Our World in Data has been my go-to for fact-checking/reasonability-checks on various claims — in my own writing or the editing of others' work — and the baseline for quickly, powerfully, and beautifully illustrating numbers for some important aspect of global development or economics-related observation. 
Outdated facts, incorrect statements, and motivated reasoning can go overboard on all sides of the ideological distribution — as expertly illustrated by Hannah Ritchie's Not the End of the World, reining in the worst of environmentalism's excesses. (In my notes from reading that book, I have "She does for environmental issues what Hans Rosling did for health — politely telling people they're wrong." That's high praise coming from a native Swede for whom Rosling's lectures and educational efforts were life-changing.) Ever since, my contrarian nature has wanted to help improve even further the incredible resource that is OWID.
Across these topics, my goal has always been to help readers better understand the world through careful and nuanced interpretation of evidence.
My subject-matter background lay in slightly different fields than those most directly relatable to OWID but it illustrates that I am comfortable working with highly specialized material and translating it into clear, accessible writing for a wider audience — always with an eye to educating my readers in unexpected ways.  While my background is in economics rather than data science, I have extensive experience working with empirical research, interpreting datasets, and communicating quantitative findings. I am keen to deepen these skills further, particularly in close collaboration with researchers and through the use of OWID’s data and visualization tools.
Sincerely,
/J

Also, gotta thank the comments in the @0xbitcoiner post #1471740... tagging the rest of the peeps involved @TotallyHumanWriter @chris21million @SimpleStacker

LOL, Chat says

You’ve got strong raw material here—voice, substance, and a clear fit. But in its current form, this letter would likely hurt your chances at Our World in Data rather than help them.

uh-huuu

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You are a pretty great writer, so I don't think I can improve it much on that count.

But if I had a suggestion, it would be to remember that you have to some how make it stand out against all the other pretty good writers. This means my default cover letter is pretty often weird (I also don't think I've ever gotten a job because of a cover letter I've writtern, so there's that...)

I think If I was writing this letter, I'd try to pack it with data, it still needs to be readable, because afterall, they aren't hiring a data analyst, they're hiring a writer. So probably the data needs to be about you: overwhelm them with the data on your publications and online writing. Don't hit them with the normal, "I'm applying..." opening. Smack 'em upside the head with data right from the get go.

The tone you use on SN is excellent. It's breezy, easy to read, snarky, and fun. I never have to wade through your pieces; I slide through them like I'm an ice-skater. It's an excellent feeling. I often will much rather read your reviews of articles than the articles themselves. This is a super power. If you have a chance to showcase that tone: go for it.

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you have to some how make it stand out
  1. Be distinct
  2. If possible, be good
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that, I think I've managed.

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Think about what your path to getting the job is.

Here's what I'm guessing it would be: they have a bunch of good, yet indistinguishable, candidates and while they're mulling over the choice at least a couple of them keep wondering what it would be like to add that odd econ guy to the mix instead. You become a Path B to be considered against the whole group of normal options.

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exactly. You'll have 500 highly educated, credentialed (female!) environmentalists who want to "save the world." They all look the same, have the same degrees in sustainability and environmental engineering and whatever, worked and interned at the same places...

the other option: get someone who will constantly check your biases, won't automatically share your ideological/belief systems, and won't put up with your motivated reasoning. It'll make your truth-seeking, evidence-first, data-only resource better -- but it'll be a mess to work with (what, he won't sign his emails with he/him??), and hard af to justify to anybody else -.-

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Say that, as directly as you can but, you know, nicely.

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I copy-pasted that into Chat... was not happy.... I'll show you where you're wrong, assumes problems with your employer, sends the wrong message...

I honestly hate these ridiculous word plays.

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Something like the following might be worth trying:

You likely have hundreds of highly educated, credentialed applicants who want to "save the world." They all look the same, have the same degrees, worked and interned at the same places.

Here's another option: hire someone who will constantly check your biases, won't automatically share your preconceptions, and push back on your motivated reasoning (even when I agree with you). It'll make your truth-seeking, evidence-first, data-only resource better.

The trick here is that most likely these folks think they value ideological diversity but will actually dismiss almost any specific view that differs from their own.

The tone you use on SN is excellent. It's breezy, easy to read, snarky, and fun. I never have to wade through your pieces; I slide through them like I'm an ice-skater. It's an excellent feeling.

hot damn, is this high praise. My gosh, imma blushing

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how's this opening?

In the 3,000-odd days since I published my first article for a popular magazine, I’ve authored 438 articles on economics, politics, statistics, book reviews, environmentalism, monetary regimes, or bitcoin. Some were read by the non-dead internet’s, let’s say, 1.5 readers; some were read by hundreds of thousands and drowned my Twitter mentions for weeks; some were academic articles for scholarly journals, others long-reads with hundreds of hours of work behind them. But the ones I’m most proud of were the ones where I dug out some numbers from an archive or database and presented novel data in support of some argument.
Writers with years of practice, or these days novices with a decent LLM, can produce mediocre, bland, seemingly authentic prose. But uncovering and making sense of raw data, trudging through spreadsheets in search of relevant statistical information to support or triangulate an issue, that’s unbeatable.
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I’ve authored 438 articles on economics, politics, statistics, book reviews, environmentalism, monetary regimes, or bitcoin in the last 3,000 days, published in [list 'em]

But honestly, I suspect you know best. group editing in public is impossible.

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The second part is great. The first part is boring.

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The "someone is wrong on the internet meme" sentence is high risk high reward. It can make you stand out; it can also make them axe your candidacy.

I think emphasizing your contrarian nature on environmentalism is risky. But I don't know OWID enough to really say how big of an issue that'll be.

You definitely want to include a link to your portfolio of work in the cover letter.

This could be step 1 in the undisc/den takeover of normie econ media

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This could be step 1 in the undisc/den takeover of normie econ media

my sentiments exactly!

As for the meme, it's already gone; and the contrarian environmentalism I can't exactly avoid that... quick googlings find, uh, this #511561

or um, this
https://thedailyeconomy.org/article/lets-cancel-environmentalism-a-triple-review-of-environmentalisms-opponents/

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how much posturing on inequality is unfounded, how many environmentalist claims around deforestation and natural disasters are misleading

This, I'm pretty sure, will get your application tossed in the virtual bin. The bolded sentence is great and I think you could tuck this into it:

"Like the 'someone is wrong on the internet' meme, I'm often drawn to challenging prevailing narratives by grounding arguments in evidence: i.e. pushing back on misleading claims about inequality or deforestation."

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quite possibly. Or when they open up my prev employer and see the arch-drifter Bailey there... oops.

No, but on a serious note: on the offchance I have anything to bring to them at all (=stand out), it is precisely that opposing, non-doomerism outlook. And if I remember correctly, Hannah Ritchie has written things along those lines too:

  • deforestation bad, but improving rapidly
  • not as bad as you'd think

also, here is the most striking note from her book:

the "biggest risk of climate change" (p. 72) isn't polar caps, wildfires, or crop failures but that "not everyone is richer."
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The issue isn't what positions you're taking. In fact, it will be an advantage that you take unpopular positions and have a substantial track record of doing so. The way you wrote it initially will set off red flags that you want to use their platform to grind your ideological axe.

It's a bit of a fine line, but you want it to be clear that you have no sacred cows and will push back on anything that is at odds with the available evidence, rather than that you're coming in to push for a particular perspective.

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riiiight, that makes sense yeah. Tricky thing to convey in a quick, first-glance filtering stage.

Over beer in the park? Easy peasy

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You're getting there. These letters suck to write.

I'd actually recommend asking someone who knows you well and understands what you can offer this sort of job to write a draft of the letter for you. Sometimes our friends are better at singing our praises than we our.

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already doing that. He wants me to get this job more than I do, lol

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Not really my lane but I think from a professionalism prospective your letter is great.

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For years, Our World in Data has been my go-to for fact-checking/reasonability-checks

Sorry did you mean to say Stacker News? 🤣🤣

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yeeeeesss, naturally

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