> “I opened a door,” she said. “You walked.”
> “Why?” Emma asked.
> “You were my best pair,” Vega said. “Even when you stopped teaming up.” She tapped her whistle. “I like good endings.”

Thanks for the editing critique! Should it be:

“I opened a door, you walked,” she said.
“Why?” Emma asked.
“You were my best pair. Even when you stopped teaming up.” Vega tapped her whistle. “I like good endings.”

Or just drop the whistle action tag?

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>“I opened a door,” she said. “You walked.”
“Why?” Emma asked.
“You were my best pair,” Vega said. “Even when you stopped teaming up.” She tapped her whistle. “I like good endings.”

These interjections made the text very truncated.